Grussel the pig

       Grussel the pig

     

Once upon a time there lived a silly pig named  

Grussel.They lived in frog bottom field. As the sun

Was beating down they were all getting ready for

Bed.A posh pig was taking a bath.A greedy pig

Was drinking hot chocolate. a sleepy pig

Was making the bed. They all went to sleep

except Grussel. Grussel was wide awake.  

He was thinking that he was to hot. Grusel

Had a silly idea he took off his pj. He had another silly

Idea he softly whispered  maybe it needs to be really

Dark. So he put his  cozy beanie over his head

But it was to scary . So then he did something

Silly he used a frog as his pillow.  But the pillow

Jumped away. So he had an idea he tried to

Sleep in the old rusty racket car. It had

so much trash you could not see the floor.

He had a cosy blanket over him but this car was

was to cramped. You won't believe this he tried

to sleep in a tree. But he felt claustrophobic.

He had a exsterdnery idea he waned to cont things.

He counted his tiny feet ,1234 still not sleepy.

He counted the stars 1 2 304560000 I'm still not

Sleepy. Next he counted the stars again still not sleepy.

Then he counted the sheep 1 2 3 4 5

6 7 8 9 still not sleepy. but then he clicked I have not counted me 10. Then he fell fast asleep and in the morning everyone ate breakfast and made their beds and played outside but one pig was still asleep it was Grussel.

The end .

We have been Learning About narratives. We looked at lots of picture books.We read Russell the sheep by Rob Scotton. We changed the main character and wrote our own version of it. I have tried to highlight the adjectives.