This week we had to do a blog post of what is the Difference between Tamasi,s fight and the battle in the park. What is visualization? To me, visualization means picturing something or someone in your head to help you understand more about them or it and getting a picture in your head to know what someone or something looks like.
This is my work
1. Tamasi,s fight in the park was physical and the fight in the park was not a fight but a dance battle.
2. Tamasi's fight is not fun when the battle in the park is fun.
3. They go to different schools.
Picture of my work.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Showing posts with label reading. Show all posts
Showing posts with label reading. Show all posts
Tuesday, 2 July 2019
Monday, 1 July 2019
the Sinai war
What is visualization? To me, visualization means picturing something or someone in your head to help you understand more about them or it and getting a picture in your head to know what someone or something looks like.
This week for reading we read a book I would tell you what the book is called but...
I forgot anyways we had to visualize what we would hear see and smell we could not draw pictures or anything it had to be all words. a part of the story was about a boy who's papa went to the Sinai war and we had to write what the boy's papa would have seen heard and smell but instead of just putting in does three questions I decided to put in one more question what I would feel emotion wise and physical wise because I felt I couldn't miss that question because it is very impotent.
This is my work. Hope you find it interesting to read and imagine.
Seen
Papa Ari could see endless path's covered in yellow dust mountains. He can see speaks of sand travailing with the air and wind and heaps of tall weird rocks that look like shining gold glaciers. Papa Ari could see the bright yellow sun that gave him his sun burns. Sometimes Papa Ari could see hiss family waving at him and a boat sitting on the ocean soon he realized that not real. Papa Ari did not see grey rain clouds knor did he see on rain drop fall from the sky. Soon papa Ari could see men making wills to their family just in case they don't return home but instead get a very sad soldier standing at the door. Papa Ari could see to different teams getting ready for the battle of their lives or should we say for their lives. Papa Ari could now see bombs getting thrown at people and he could see huge army trucks pointing at the other side he could see bullets from gun's hitting people. Papa Ari could see the blood from the men who have fallen. Tears from the men who's friends have lost their lives on the battle field. Tears from the soldiers who are scared. Papa Ari has first handed witnessed tragedy.
Heard
Papa Ari would often hear peace and quiet and actionly a eagle yelling in the sky and soldiers singing songs. Out of the dead silence bombs will go off he could hear gun shoots being fired away and the thud off the men falling on ground he could hear sobbing from the men. Papa Ari could hear the whistling from the whistling from the wind this would constantly repeat for hour's and hour's and hour's then papa Ari could hear nothing but silence a sad lonely dreadful silence.
Smell
Papa Ari will often smell the blood from the men.Rust from the gun's.
Felt
Papa Ari would feel pride but that will soon vanish. Papa Ari would feel pride because he was fighting for the one's he loved and his country. Papa Ari would feel sand all over his body making himself really itchy. A changed happened as soon as hit the battle field when gun's started firing. Papa Ari felt the warm sun on his face .
When the guns started firing Papa Ari felt angry because he had killed so many innocent lives the reason why just cause they choose to fight for their country. Then he felt sad because his friend had passed away and he felt scared for his own life. It was a endless circle of terror. When the war was over Papa Ari could not feel pride because you cant take pride in killing someone.
Monday, 24 June 2019
Fight In The Park!!!
What is visualization? To me, visualization means picturing something or someone in your head to help you understand more about them or it and getting a picture in your head to know what someone or something looks like.
This week had given another task similar to the teacher blog post we did about a week ago but this time our task was bigger and better. Our teacher told us a story about a kid getting in a fight between him and another student from a different school and then we had had to draw a picture of what we would think the fight would have looked like also we had to write what we would see hear and smell.
In my writing, I wrote I would hear yelling kids debating which school would win and I also hear the sound of at least two fists slamming against something. I would smell the muddy grass and the winter air that gives me a cold. I would see a park with kids surrounding two boys from a different school the kids have their phones out recording the boys from the different school who seem to be fighting I could see the grey dark clouds and lighting.
This is what I would see...
In my writing, I wrote I would hear yelling kids debating which school would win and I also hear the sound of at least two fists slamming against something. I would smell the muddy grass and the winter air that gives me a cold. I would see a park with kids surrounding two boys from a different school the kids have their phones out recording the boys from the different school who seem to be fighting I could see the grey dark clouds and lighting.
This is what I would see...
Friday, 14 June 2019
Term 2 week 7 Reading task- visualization
This week Mr. Mitchell gave us a task. We needed to visualize a teacher from a book just by listening to the story then we needed to draw her.
What is visualization? To me, visualization means picturing something or someone in your head to help you understand more about them or it and getting a picture in your head to know what someone or something looks like.
When it was time to do the task the teacher described the teacher's personality and what she likes and what she looks like by reading the story. From what The teacher read I had learned that she had a bubbly personality and was look up to by the kids in the school she played the violin and loved old fashion songs she also wore casual clothes with leather boots. She had ring earrings and liked painting and she had out of control hair caused by her constantly playing with her hair or the wind blowing it out of control. Her desk was cluttered with stuff and she smiled so often she had wrinkles around her mouth. She loved reading and drinking hot coffee.
After listening to the story I knew exactly how to draw the teacher. For her, out of control hair, I made it fuzzy and tied up in a bun I also made her hair pink to show her original and bubbly personality. For her top and paths, I made her wear a spotty T-shirt and jeans and suspenders. I made her wear gold hooped earrings and leather black boot's I made her hold a cup of hot coffee and a book and I drew her with her smile and her wrinkles from her smiling so much. Now that I am done I have taken a picture of my artwork of the teacher I hope you guys enjoy it.
What is visualization? To me, visualization means picturing something or someone in your head to help you understand more about them or it and getting a picture in your head to know what someone or something looks like.
When it was time to do the task the teacher described the teacher's personality and what she likes and what she looks like by reading the story. From what The teacher read I had learned that she had a bubbly personality and was look up to by the kids in the school she played the violin and loved old fashion songs she also wore casual clothes with leather boots. She had ring earrings and liked painting and she had out of control hair caused by her constantly playing with her hair or the wind blowing it out of control. Her desk was cluttered with stuff and she smiled so often she had wrinkles around her mouth. She loved reading and drinking hot coffee.
After listening to the story I knew exactly how to draw the teacher. For her, out of control hair, I made it fuzzy and tied up in a bun I also made her hair pink to show her original and bubbly personality. For her top and paths, I made her wear a spotty T-shirt and jeans and suspenders. I made her wear gold hooped earrings and leather black boot's I made her hold a cup of hot coffee and a book and I drew her with her smile and her wrinkles from her smiling so much. Now that I am done I have taken a picture of my artwork of the teacher I hope you guys enjoy it.
Friday, 25 August 2017
update of would you eat bugs?
would you ever dear to eat bugs?
this week my reading group has made a poster to convulse people all around the world to eat bugs!
here are some cool facts that will make you wanna eat bugs. So tell if this poster will convince you to
eat bugs?
this week my reading group has made a poster to convulse people all around the world to eat bugs!
here are some cool facts that will make you wanna eat bugs. So tell if this poster will convince you to
eat bugs?
would you ever dear to eat bugs?
would you ever dear to eat bugs?
this week my reading group has made a poster to convulse people all around the world to eat bugs!
here are some cool facts that will make you wanna eat bugs. So tell if this poster will convince you to
eat bugs? also can you tell me how I could make my poster better
Wednesday, 14 June 2017
Hello guys this is my reading work about nits we made post. I work really hard on this.
we all do not like Nites well here is some things what they don't like and a monkey has them to
poor monkey.
we all do not like Nites well here is some things what they don't like and a monkey has them to
poor monkey.
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