I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Tennessee, this is Tama from St. Bernadette's school. I like your drawing of a reflection that you made from a google drawing. Next time could you add more words telling us what you are learning about. I am look forward to seeing your next presentation again.
Hi Tennessee, I am a year six student at St Bernadette's School and my name is Ramsay. I like the way you have created your own reflection piece and I also like how you were so enthusi astic about doing your reflection again. Something you could try and put more detail and also put more character. Any ways Keep it up.
Hello Tennessee my name is Tali and I am a year SIX from St Bernadette's School. This is my first time looking at your blog and I thought it looked WONDERFUL. I liked how you used a google drawing for your reflection work. Maybe next time you could add some information about what you are reflection.
hi Tennessee next time add some more info an go over work and make it make so the readers can be under stand it reminds of Line of symmetry but you did your best .
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Hi Tennessee, this is Tama from St. Bernadette's school. I like your drawing of a reflection that you made from a google drawing. Next time could you add more words telling us what you are learning about. I am look forward to seeing your next presentation again.
ReplyDeletethank you for your comment it really made my day Tama and thank you for the helpful part I will add more words next time. By Tennessee
DeleteHi Tennessee, I am a year six student at St Bernadette's School and my name is Ramsay. I like the way you have created your own reflection piece and I also like how you were so enthusi
ReplyDeleteastic about doing your reflection again. Something you could try and put more detail and also put more character. Any ways Keep it up.
Hello Tennessee my name is Tali and I am a year SIX from St Bernadette's School. This is my first time looking at your blog and I thought it looked WONDERFUL. I liked how you used a google drawing for your reflection work. Maybe next time you could add some information about what you are reflection.
ReplyDeletehi Tennessee next time add some more info an go over work and make it make so the readers can be under stand it reminds of Line of symmetry
ReplyDeletebut you did your best .