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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 27 August 2019

Drama

The is week we have been learning about drama we have to do a blog post about how laughing helps us in the world we live in so here is what I have to say my own option about this task in hand



Anyway

 Laughthter can help with your confidence.
It is very fun.
Shows your personality.
Laughthter makes you really happy.
Laughter shows that you are alive.

Next I need to show you a funny video then explain why it is funny so.


This episode makes me laugh because Mr beans girlfriend is looking at a post with a ring on it in the store then when it is time to open the presents she got her present it looked like rapping paper covering a square card bored she see end confused but she ended up opening it to find the poster she was looking at at the store that made her cry Mr bean came up to her to reveal a a bot that would normally hold a ring she got exsited but when she opens the box it had a hook to hold her poster up this made me laugh 😂

Friday, 2 August 2019

sports weekly

This week in our P.E Hurumanu we have been… 

                                Warm-up


(What)                   This week in hurumanu we have been focusing on teamwork to help                                               (Where) improve our team-up we did one warm-up game and two games. For                                      
(Why)                     the warm-up we needed to do laps this was a team activity that included                                  
                               Three teammates my teammates where Jolly-Rose and Liyah.  Our goal
                                Was to do 100 laps sadly we did not achieve this goal but we could push  
                                Ourself’s more next time. As we ran these laps we decided to have Liyah 
                                And jolly rose run together well I calculated the laps then we had Jolly- rose and I run together as Liyah calculated the laps and then  Leyah and I run well Jolly- rose calculated the laps. We decided to use this method because it would be easier and faster to get to 100. During this warm-up, I know we use teamwork when we supported each other and had two people running laps at the same time well the other teammate calculated our score.  


Hockey  

                         
                                
                                   

S - Statement            
E - Explanation
E - Example


Statement
Our first activity was…. For this activity, I rated my self as a … Our first activity was hockey I rated myself a four because I was having fun supporting my teammates putting the hockey sticks away nicely and giving it my all.

Explanation

To achieve a level … we have to show that we can consistently … Listening and behaving well being a team player.

Monday, 24 June 2019

Fight In The Park!!!

What is visualization? To me, visualization means picturing something or someone in your head to help you understand more about them or it and getting a picture in your head to know what someone or something looks like.

This week had given another task similar to the teacher blog post we did about a week ago but this time our task was bigger and better. Our teacher told us a story about a kid getting in a fight between him and another student from a different school and then we had had to draw a picture of what we would think the fight would have looked like also we had to write what we would see hear and smell.


In my writing, I wrote I would hear yelling kids debating which school would win and I also hear the sound of at least two fists slamming against something. I would smell the muddy grass and the winter air that gives me a cold. I would see a park with kids surrounding two boys from a different school the kids have their phones out recording the boys from the different school who seem to be fighting I could see the grey dark clouds and lighting.


This is what I would see...


Tuesday, 25 September 2018

late for school

My next story is about  me being late for School and I tell  the reason why I was late for school  this story is made up I hope you enjoy. Please give me feed beck so it can help me with my next journey of work


I came in class and I was  late Mr Mitchell asked me why I was so late? So I told him it was quite a funny story. I said I woke up too brush my teeth but I realized  it was not tooth paste it was foot cream then I went to go get dressed but my close where on backwards and I did not notice after I went to get in the car with my close on wrong but I forgot my shoes so I had to go back into  the house my mum yells (THERE IS A SPIDER IN MY HAIR) now all of us girls are screaming for our life because it was a hairy scary spider it jumped on it mum's head. and then my brother comes with a broomstick and said (I will fix this) and with one swing he hit my mum head to get the spider out but my mum was out cold   so we had to call the ambulance and get her help but the ambulance broke down so they needed a tow truck but that tow truck broke down so the biggest tow truck in the world came and lifted the ambulance the small toe truck and the big toe truck to safety so we caught a taxi to get to school but the taxi took us all the way to america so we had to walk all the way to Hornby and then you asked my why i was late. I looked at Mr Mitchel and i notice he was wearing headphones he took them of and said( why are you not telling me why you were late)  I look at Mr Mitchell in a grumpy look and i took a deep breath and I had to tell my big story aging.

Thursday, 19 October 2017

Te Manu Tukutuku

There readers of my blog today I had mad a poem for my new school. I had to describe what it is like to be here. First I had to think what I was going to do. next I had to write my poem it had to have what it looked like what it smelt like and what I felt like in the new school. I hope you enjoy my whiting bye
😃


Te Manu Tukutuku Poem

When I am in Te Manu Tukutuku  I can see a big building also i can see blue orange and green.
When I am in  Te Manu Tukutuku I can smell the fresh smell of new furniture inside our School as if they were flowers.   
When I am in Te Manu Tukutuku I can hear dropping basket  balls on the ground and people gossiping about our new School.
When I am in Te Manu Tukutuku.   
 I feel proud and astonished that I can be here.  

By Tennessee

Friday, 21 October 2016

Kit kat cat

           we have bean learning how to write persuasive piece  of whiting. we had to convince Miss McLeod to get a cat
this is my persuasive whiting. I had to use persuasive words and
phrases that were convincing. I learned  what persuasive mean
And I enjoyed whiting this story.


Collaborative Success Criteria
  • The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
  • Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
  • The reasons why with supporting ideas

Kit kat cat
Did you no ms Mcleod is going to get a pet. Well I think ms Mcleod should get a cat because they are clever, funny and cheap.

One reason why mss Mcleod  should get a cat because they are clever.  They are great Climbing high  in trees to the sky. They can stand on 2 feet.

Secondly mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are funny.  When they want to eat and as well as standing on 2 feet they hold there hands up like a bunny rabot.And sometime they don't land when they jump. Its funny when they fart.

Lastly mss  Mcleod should get a cat because they are cheap. They are cheap because they don't eat as much as dogs. and their toys are cheap to because most of there toys are  2 doles or 5 doles.

Overall I think Mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are cheap funny and clever. So buy a pet now call 0800008008 no refunds.

Thursday, 7 July 2016

Chocolate writing

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Attempt 1
As Mrs Mcguinniety wolk in the  open doors I saw not one not  two not  3 but 5 blocks of royal gorgeous chocolate.

when mss meagunty opened the rapper I heard a rattle a crablel a cranss then
All was sightly not a sound  well it did take awhile. When I taught it it felt like it wall
Malt in my hands. When I saw it looked like a brick. When I smelt it it tickled
My nose. When I tasted it it slowly faded in my mouth.


Attempt 2

As Mrs Mcguinniety walked in the  open doors I saw not one not  two not  3 but 5 blocks of royal gorgeous chocolate.

when mss meagunty opened the rapper I heard a rattle a crackle and a crunch.  Then
all was silent not a sound.  Well it did take Mrs McGuinniety a while to open the packet. When I felt it it felt like it will melt in my hands. When I saw it looked like a brick. When I smelt it it tickled my nose . I smelt vanilla too. When I tasted it it slowly faded in my mouth.The chocolate melted in my mouth. It tasted creamy and moist with a rich flavour.





Friday, 27 May 2016

Tennessee walrus descriptive writing

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Walrus description

Their tusks are rotten and not good to look to see
I don't blame them because all course they can't
Brush their teeth because they don't got any
Thing to use. Their teeth are used to hunt
Down animals. Their tusks look quite pointy but they
aren't that sharp.

When I look at the skin there skin is quit wrinkly
And there body have tiny hair on its body
And lone bits on there buddy there skin is pink and
Brown. But did you no they can't get sunburn.

Their hear on there skin can also be quite  big.
Inside it body have a huge amount of blubber.
Blubber help some animals be warm . They have
A huge body ass you see. Whales can swim and
They liked the water.

What the face look like ?
They have long wisgers they have tinny
Eyes they can have black ease or brown ease
There  face is brown. They are bold.

Friday, 20 May 2016

Grussel the pig

Pig, Farm, Animal, Agriculture        Grussel the pig
     

Once upon a time there lived a silly pig named  
Grussel.They lived in frog bottom field. As the sun
Was beating down they were all getting ready for
Bed.A posh pig was taking a bath.A greedy pig
Was drinking hot chocolate. a sleepy pig
Was making the bed. They all went to sleep
except Grussel. Grussel was wide awake.  
He was thinking that he was to hot. Grusel
Had a silly idea he took off his pj. He had another silly
Idea he softly whispered  maybe it needs to be really
Dark. So he put his  cozy beanie over his head
But it was to scary . So then he did something
Silly he used a frog as his pillow.  But the pillow
Jumped away. So he had an idea he tried to
Sleep in the old rusty racket car. It had
so much trash you could not see the floor.
He had a cosy blanket over him but this car was
was to cramped. You won't believe this he tried
to sleep in a tree. But he felt claustrophobic.
He had a exsterdnery idea he waned to cont things.
He counted his tiny feet ,1234 still not sleepy.
He counted the stars 1 2 304560000 I'm still not
Sleepy. Next he counted the stars again still not sleepy.
Then he counted the sheep 1 2 3 4 5
6 7 8 9 still not sleepy. but then he clicked I have not counted me 10. Then he fell fast asleep and in the morning everyone ate breakfast and made their beds and played outside but one pig was still asleep it was Grussel.

The end .

We have been Learning About narratives. We looked at lots of picture books.We read Russell the sheep by Rob Scotton. We changed the main character and wrote our own version of it. I have tried to highlight the adjectives.

Friday, 15 April 2016

Anzac Ted Writing

This is my Anzac Ted writing that I have done this week. 
It took one day to finish it.
I have learned how to use adjectives.