Attempt 1
As Mrs Mcguinniety wolk in the open doors I saw not one not two not 3 but 5 blocks of royal gorgeous chocolate.
when mss meagunty opened the rapper I heard a rattle a crablel a cranss then
All was sightly not a sound well it did take awhile. When I taught it it felt like it wall
Malt in my hands. When I saw it looked like a brick. When I smelt it it tickled
My nose. When I tasted it it slowly faded in my mouth.
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Attempt 2
As Mrs Mcguinniety walked in the open doors I saw not one not two not 3 but 5 blocks of royal gorgeous chocolate.
when mss meagunty opened the rapper I heard a rattle a crackle and a crunch. Then
all was silent not a sound. Well it did take Mrs McGuinniety a while to open the packet. When I felt it it felt like it will melt in my hands. When I saw it looked like a brick. When I smelt it it tickled my nose . I smelt vanilla too. When I tasted it it slowly faded in my mouth.The chocolate melted in my mouth. It tasted creamy and moist with a rich flavour. |
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 7 July 2016
Chocolate writing
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24 hour footprint
This is my 24 hour footprint hope you like this work.By Tennessee
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