Kit kat cat

           we have bean learning how to write persuasive piece  of whiting. we had to convince Miss McLeod to get a cat
this is my persuasive whiting. I had to use persuasive words and
phrases that were convincing. I learned  what persuasive mean
And I enjoyed whiting this story.

Collaborative Success Criteria

• The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
• Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
• The reasons why with supporting ideas

Kit kat cat

Did you no ms Mcleod is going to get a pet. Well I think ms Mcleod should get a cat because they are clever, funny and cheap.

One reason why mss Mcleod  should get a cat because they are clever.  They are great Climbing high  in trees to the sky. They can stand on 2 feet.

Secondly mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are funny.  When they want to eat and as well as standing on 2 feet they hold there hands up like a bunny rabot.And sometime they don't land when they jump. Its funny when they fart.

Lastly mss  Mcleod should get a cat because they are cheap. They are cheap because they don't eat as much as dogs. and their toys are cheap to because most of there toys are  2 doles or 5 doles.

Overall I think Mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are cheap funny and clever. So buy a pet now call 0800008008 no refunds.