I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Tennessee this is Caleb from St Bernadette's, I am a Year 5 student in Room 8. I liked the way you spaced your writing out. I thought you did a good job. Next time you might like to add a picture. I am looking forward to seeing a poem about winter.
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Hi Tennessee this is Caleb from St Bernadette's, I am a Year 5 student in Room 8. I liked the way you spaced your writing out. I thought you did a good job. Next time you might like to add a picture. I am looking forward to seeing a poem about winter.
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