This week for reading we read a book I would tell you what the book is called but...
I forgot anyways we had to visualize what we would hear see and smell we could not draw pictures or anything it had to be all words. a part of the story was about a boy who's papa went to the Sinai war and we had to write what the boy's papa would have seen heard and smell but instead of just putting in does three questions I decided to put in one more question what I would feel emotion wise and physical wise because I felt I couldn't miss that question because it is very impotent.
This is my work. Hope you find it interesting to read and imagine.
Seen
Papa Ari could see endless path's covered in yellow dust mountains. He can see speaks of sand travailing with the air and wind and heaps of tall weird rocks that look like shining gold glaciers. Papa Ari could see the bright yellow sun that gave him his sun burns. Sometimes Papa Ari could see hiss family waving at him and a boat sitting on the ocean soon he realized that not real. Papa Ari did not see grey rain clouds knor did he see on rain drop fall from the sky. Soon papa Ari could see men making wills to their family just in case they don't return home but instead get a very sad soldier standing at the door. Papa Ari could see to different teams getting ready for the battle of their lives or should we say for their lives. Papa Ari could now see bombs getting thrown at people and he could see huge army trucks pointing at the other side he could see bullets from gun's hitting people. Papa Ari could see the blood from the men who have fallen. Tears from the men who's friends have lost their lives on the battle field. Tears from the soldiers who are scared. Papa Ari has first handed witnessed tragedy.
Heard
Papa Ari would often hear peace and quiet and actionly a eagle yelling in the sky and soldiers singing songs. Out of the dead silence bombs will go off he could hear gun shoots being fired away and the thud off the men falling on ground he could hear sobbing from the men. Papa Ari could hear the whistling from the whistling from the wind this would constantly repeat for hour's and hour's and hour's then papa Ari could hear nothing but silence a sad lonely dreadful silence.
Smell
Papa Ari will often smell the blood from the men.Rust from the gun's.
Felt
Papa Ari would feel pride but that will soon vanish. Papa Ari would feel pride because he was fighting for the one's he loved and his country. Papa Ari would feel sand all over his body making himself really itchy. A changed happened as soon as hit the battle field when gun's started firing. Papa Ari felt the warm sun on his face .
When the guns started firing Papa Ari felt angry because he had killed so many innocent lives the reason why just cause they choose to fight for their country. Then he felt sad because his friend had passed away and he felt scared for his own life. It was a endless circle of terror. When the war was over Papa Ari could not feel pride because you cant take pride in killing someone.
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