I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 29 November 2016
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Friday, 21 October 2016
Kit kat cat
we have bean learning how to write persuasive piece of whiting. we had to convince Miss McLeod to get a cat
this is my persuasive whiting. I had to use persuasive words and
phrases that were convincing. I learned what persuasive mean
And I enjoyed whiting this story.
this is my persuasive whiting. I had to use persuasive words and
phrases that were convincing. I learned what persuasive mean
And I enjoyed whiting this story.
Collaborative Success Criteria
- The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
- Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
- The reasons why with supporting ideas
Kit kat cat
Did you no ms Mcleod is going to get a pet. Well I think ms Mcleod should get a cat because they are clever, funny and cheap.
One reason why mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are clever. They are great Climbing high in trees to the sky. They can stand on 2 feet.
Secondly mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are funny. When they want to eat and as well as standing on 2 feet they hold there hands up like a bunny rabot.And sometime they don't land when they jump. Its funny when they fart.
Lastly mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are cheap. They are cheap because they don't eat as much as dogs. and their toys are cheap to because most of there toys are 2 doles or 5 doles.
Overall I think Mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are cheap funny and clever. So buy a pet now call 0800008008 no refunds.
Wednesday, 19 October 2016
For reading we read a amazing story about adopting a pet. specificity I liked the Conclusion
when it said you might find the perfect pet for you. In the blog post it shows what you need to do to look after a pet.read this please read this blog post
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