Chocolate writing

Attempt 1 As Mrs Mcguinniety wolk in the  open doors I saw not one not  two not  3 but 5 blocks of royal gorgeous chocolate. when mss meagunty opened the rapper I heard a rattle a crablel a cranss then All was sightly not a sound  well it did take awhile. When I taught it it felt like it wall Malt in my hands. When I saw it looked like a brick. When I smelt it it tickled My nose. When I tasted it it slowly faded in my mouth.

Attempt 2 As Mrs Mcguinniety walked in the  open doors I saw not one not  two not  3 but 5 blocks of royal gorgeous chocolate. when mss meagunty opened the rapper I heard a rattle a crackle and a crunch.  Then all was silent not a sound.  Well it did take Mrs McGuinniety a while to open the packet. When I felt it it felt like it will melt in my hands. When I saw it looked like a brick. When I smelt it it tickled my nose . I smelt vanilla too. When I tasted it it slowly faded in my mouth.The chocolate melted in my mouth. It tasted creamy and moist with a rich flavour.

This is my apple work

                                                                                                                             

   This is my apple work. It has bright colours and  it was very fun to make.

24 hour footprint

This is my 24 hour footprint  hope you like this work.By Tennessee

Tennessee walrus descriptive writing

Walrus description

Their tusks are rotten and not good to look to see

I don't blame them because all course they can't

Brush their teeth because they don't got any

Thing to use. Their teeth are used to hunt

Down animals. Their tusks look quite pointy but they

aren't that sharp.

When I look at the skin there skin is quit wrinkly

And there body have tiny hair on its body

And lone bits on there buddy there skin is pink and

Brown. But did you no they can't get sunburn.

Their hear on there skin can also be quite  big.

Inside it body have a huge amount of blubber.

Blubber help some animals be warm . They have

A huge body ass you see. Whales can swim and

They liked the water.

What the face look like ?

They have long wisgers they have tinny

Eyes they can have black ease or brown ease

There  face is brown. They are bold.

Grussel the pig

       Grussel the pig

     

Once upon a time there lived a silly pig named  

Grussel.They lived in frog bottom field. As the sun

Was beating down they were all getting ready for

Bed.A posh pig was taking a bath.A greedy pig

Was drinking hot chocolate. a sleepy pig

Was making the bed. They all went to sleep

except Grussel. Grussel was wide awake.  

He was thinking that he was to hot. Grusel

Had a silly idea he took off his pj. He had another silly

Idea he softly whispered  maybe it needs to be really

Dark. So he put his  cozy beanie over his head

But it was to scary . So then he did something

Silly he used a frog as his pillow.  But the pillow

Jumped away. So he had an idea he tried to

Sleep in the old rusty racket car. It had

so much trash you could not see the floor.

He had a cosy blanket over him but this car was

was to cramped. You won't believe this he tried

to sleep in a tree. But he felt claustrophobic.

He had a exsterdnery idea he waned to cont things.

He counted his tiny feet ,1234 still not sleepy.

He counted the stars 1 2 304560000 I'm still not

Sleepy. Next he counted the stars again still not sleepy.

Then he counted the sheep 1 2 3 4 5

6 7 8 9 still not sleepy. but then he clicked I have not counted me 10. Then he fell fast asleep and in the morning everyone ate breakfast and made their beds and played outside but one pig was still asleep it was Grussel.

The end .

We have been Learning About narratives. We looked at lots of picture books.We read Russell the sheep by Rob Scotton. We changed the main character and wrote our own version of it. I have tried to highlight the adjectives.

Tessellation

                                                          This is my maths work that I done this term.
                                                                 I started this term and I completed it.