I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 14 December 2016
Monday, 12 December 2016
Thursday, 8 December 2016
this blog post is about the lucky book club can you read this and give me feed back and I will
make my work even better
make my work even better
Tuesday, 29 November 2016
Monday, 28 November 2016
Friday, 18 November 2016
Friday, 21 October 2016
Kit kat cat
we have bean learning how to write persuasive piece of whiting. we had to convince Miss McLeod to get a cat
this is my persuasive whiting. I had to use persuasive words and
phrases that were convincing. I learned what persuasive mean
And I enjoyed whiting this story.
this is my persuasive whiting. I had to use persuasive words and
phrases that were convincing. I learned what persuasive mean
And I enjoyed whiting this story.
Collaborative Success Criteria
- The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
- Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
- The reasons why with supporting ideas
Kit kat cat
Did you no ms Mcleod is going to get a pet. Well I think ms Mcleod should get a cat because they are clever, funny and cheap.
One reason why mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are clever. They are great Climbing high in trees to the sky. They can stand on 2 feet.
Secondly mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are funny. When they want to eat and as well as standing on 2 feet they hold there hands up like a bunny rabot.And sometime they don't land when they jump. Its funny when they fart.
Lastly mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are cheap. They are cheap because they don't eat as much as dogs. and their toys are cheap to because most of there toys are 2 doles or 5 doles.
Overall I think Mss Mcleod should get a cat because they are cheap funny and clever. So buy a pet now call 0800008008 no refunds.
Wednesday, 19 October 2016
For reading we read a amazing story about adopting a pet. specificity I liked the Conclusion
when it said you might find the perfect pet for you. In the blog post it shows what you need to do to look after a pet.read this please read this blog post
Friday, 23 September 2016
this is my amazing story could Tennessee be funky recount first
i had to go on be funky then I had two make myself look funny The next
steep was to with about my recount. In this screen shot you can have a
look at my work. Hope you like my story.
My Calendar Art
My Calendar Art
This is my calendar art. This is how I made it:
This is my calendar art. This is how I made it:
First Mrs McG took a photo of me on a stool holding a paint brush in the air. Then we printed it
Thursday, 8 September 2016
Digi Awards 2016
For my Digi Awards entry I was focusing on helping the homeless. The topic was Be The Change. I took a photo of my principal being a homeless guy. He had to not shave, but he did so I made him a beard. I made him some signs. Mr M was wearing old clothes and big jacket and big gumboots. I was the photographer first and then I took the photo of Ella and Mr M. This photos shows how to be the change by giving money to a homeless person to help them.
Popcorn Capacity
Popcorn and Capacity
In math we are learning about capacity and volume with popcorn. We had to guess how much corn seeds will fill the cup my guess was 14. But it turned out to be 20. The we put the popcorn seed on the stove when there are in the stove the grow bigger and bigger . When we were done we had to guess how much would fill the bowl I guessed 8 but it was 12. At the end we got to eat it.
In math we are learning about capacity and volume with popcorn. We had to guess how much corn seeds will fill the cup my guess was 14. But it turned out to be 20. The we put the popcorn seed on the stove when there are in the stove the grow bigger and bigger . When we were done we had to guess how much would fill the bowl I guessed 8 but it was 12. At the end we got to eat it.
Popcorn Capacity
Popcorn and Capacity
In math we are learning about capacity and volume with popcorn. We had to guess how much corn seeds will fill the cup my guess was 14. But it turned out to be 20. The we put the popcorn seed on the stove when there are in the stove the grow bigger and bigger . When we were done we had to guess how much would fill the bowl I guessed 8 but it was 12. At the end we got to eat it.
In math we are learning about capacity and volume with popcorn. We had to guess how much corn seeds will fill the cup my guess was 14. But it turned out to be 20. The we put the popcorn seed on the stove when there are in the stove the grow bigger and bigger . When we were done we had to guess how much would fill the bowl I guessed 8 but it was 12. At the end we got to eat it.
Monday, 5 September 2016
capacity and volume
In math we are learning about capacity and volume. Capacity is how much liquid a container holds.
volume is how much liquid is in the container. We guessed how much spoonfuls of rice a cup holds
then we had two guess how much water will fill the container. I guessed 89 but it was 369 now I learnt that
how much it take to fill a container with a spoon.
volume is how much liquid is in the container. We guessed how much spoonfuls of rice a cup holds
then we had two guess how much water will fill the container. I guessed 89 but it was 369 now I learnt that
how much it take to fill a container with a spoon.
Friday, 2 September 2016
inquiry rubric
In inquiry we have been learning about the process that people go through to create a product. I have to do some planing before the real poses my protrude is alligator golf set. Ass I went fro the poses I learnt that you cant put more papa in the boll with yucky glue or you will get your self in a sticky transition. Also it is about the prose of going few. not getting stuck
Wednesday, 3 August 2016
Thinglink and Befunky
First I downloaded my photo into Befunky. Then I added some cool free accessories to my photo, like crazy hair or glasses. I saved it onto my drive then I went on Thinglink, where I wrote something about me and the things that I like.
Thursday, 7 July 2016
Chocolate writing
Attempt 1
As Mrs Mcguinniety wolk in the open doors I saw not one not two not 3 but 5 blocks of royal gorgeous chocolate.
when mss meagunty opened the rapper I heard a rattle a crablel a cranss then
All was sightly not a sound well it did take awhile. When I taught it it felt like it wall
Malt in my hands. When I saw it looked like a brick. When I smelt it it tickled
My nose. When I tasted it it slowly faded in my mouth.
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Attempt 2
As Mrs Mcguinniety walked in the open doors I saw not one not two not 3 but 5 blocks of royal gorgeous chocolate.
when mss meagunty opened the rapper I heard a rattle a crackle and a crunch. Then
all was silent not a sound. Well it did take Mrs McGuinniety a while to open the packet. When I felt it it felt like it will melt in my hands. When I saw it looked like a brick. When I smelt it it tickled my nose . I smelt vanilla too. When I tasted it it slowly faded in my mouth.The chocolate melted in my mouth. It tasted creamy and moist with a rich flavour. |
Wednesday, 6 July 2016
24 hour footprint
This is my 24 hour footprint hope you like this work.By Tennessee
Friday, 27 May 2016
Tennessee walrus descriptive writing
Walrus description
Their tusks are rotten and not good to look to see
I don't blame them because all course they can't
Brush their teeth because they don't got any
Thing to use. Their teeth are used to hunt
Down animals. Their tusks look quite pointy but they
aren't that sharp.
When I look at the skin there skin is quit wrinkly
And there body have tiny hair on its body
And lone bits on there buddy there skin is pink and
Brown. But did you no they can't get sunburn.
Their hear on there skin can also be quite big.
Inside it body have a huge amount of blubber.
Blubber help some animals be warm . They have
A huge body ass you see. Whales can swim and
They liked the water.
What the face look like ?
They have long wisgers they have tinny
Eyes they can have black ease or brown ease
There face is brown. They are bold.
Friday, 20 May 2016
Grussel the pig
Grussel the pig
Once upon a time there lived a silly pig named
Grussel.They lived in frog bottom field. As the sun
Was beating down they were all getting ready for
Bed.A posh pig was taking a bath.A greedy pig
Was drinking hot chocolate. a sleepy pig
Was making the bed. They all went to sleep
except Grussel. Grussel was wide awake.
He was thinking that he was to hot. Grusel
Had a silly idea he took off his pj. He had another silly
Idea he softly whispered maybe it needs to be really
Dark. So he put his cozy beanie over his head
But it was to scary . So then he did something
Silly he used a frog as his pillow. But the pillow
Jumped away. So he had an idea he tried to
Sleep in the old rusty racket car. It had
so much trash you could not see the floor.
He had a cosy blanket over him but this car was
was to cramped. You won't believe this he tried
to sleep in a tree. But he felt claustrophobic.
He had a exsterdnery idea he waned to cont things.
He counted his tiny feet ,1234 still not sleepy.
He counted the stars 1 2 304560000 I'm still not
Sleepy. Next he counted the stars again still not sleepy.
Then he counted the sheep 1 2 3 4 5
6 7 8 9 still not sleepy. but then he clicked I have not counted me 10. Then he fell fast asleep and in the morning everyone ate breakfast and made their beds and played outside but one pig was still asleep it was Grussel.
The end .
We have been Learning About narratives. We looked at lots of picture books.We read Russell the sheep by Rob Scotton. We changed the main character and wrote our own version of it. I have tried to highlight the adjectives.
Labels:
Narrative,
Rob scotton,
Russell the sheep,
Writing
Friday, 15 April 2016
Tessellation
This is my maths work that I done this term.
I started this term and I completed it.
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