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Friday 27 May 2016

Tennessee walrus descriptive writing

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Walrus description

Their tusks are rotten and not good to look to see
I don't blame them because all course they can't
Brush their teeth because they don't got any
Thing to use. Their teeth are used to hunt
Down animals. Their tusks look quite pointy but they
aren't that sharp.

When I look at the skin there skin is quit wrinkly
And there body have tiny hair on its body
And lone bits on there buddy there skin is pink and
Brown. But did you no they can't get sunburn.

Their hear on there skin can also be quite  big.
Inside it body have a huge amount of blubber.
Blubber help some animals be warm . They have
A huge body ass you see. Whales can swim and
They liked the water.

What the face look like ?
They have long wisgers they have tinny
Eyes they can have black ease or brown ease
There  face is brown. They are bold.

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