This week had given another task similar to the teacher blog post we did about a week ago but this time our task was bigger and better. Our teacher told us a story about a kid getting in a fight between him and another student from a different school and then we had had to draw a picture of what we would think the fight would have looked like also we had to write what we would see hear and smell.
In my writing, I wrote I would hear yelling kids debating which school would win and I also hear the sound of at least two fists slamming against something. I would smell the muddy grass and the winter air that gives me a cold. I would see a park with kids surrounding two boys from a different school the kids have their phones out recording the boys from the different school who seem to be fighting I could see the grey dark clouds and lighting.
This is what I would see...
In my writing, I wrote I would hear yelling kids debating which school would win and I also hear the sound of at least two fists slamming against something. I would smell the muddy grass and the winter air that gives me a cold. I would see a park with kids surrounding two boys from a different school the kids have their phones out recording the boys from the different school who seem to be fighting I could see the grey dark clouds and lighting.
This is what I would see...
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